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Sunday, April 10, 2016

Whitman is an IB Theatre Student

The first page of the journal looks like an address book. It  looks like faded names with numbers addresses beneath it. For example, toward the bottom of the page, it says "Mrs. Price 330 (something something) 7th and 8th white marble (something)". It is hard to read the entries because the handwriting is very faded. The second page looks like it is a an idea for a poem. The top of the page says "Brochure- two character as a dialogue between...". The next couple of pages looks like drafts of his poem as he has writing and it is crossed out with edits made above it. The poem seems to be about a president possibly. Afterwards, there are hand drawn pictures of possibly the president(s) he is writing about. This is significant because this journal gives insight about Whitman's creative process and how he creates his poems from start to finish (basically he is an IB theatre student doing his collaborative project). It gives insight to Whitman's underlying political message and themes of his poem.

When looking through the next link, I was right that this had addresses, but it wasn't a random address book. These addresses were of people that had died in the war, which gave more personal meaning and more of a message to his poem. We also find out that Whitman had a connection to Lincoln because he saw him on the way to DC. This establishes a political theme. The tabs showed that Whitman discussed ideas deeper than who had died and politics like I had thought. He discussed religion, language changes, storms, and ships in his drafts while still maintaining a liberty theme. Sadly it is established that Whitman most likely didn't draw the pictures himself, but this journal is still evidence for Whitman's creative process. He started with something that was meaningful to him such as the addresses and his meaning to Lincoln and developed it into the poems. Too bad he would get malpractice for not drawing the pictures himself!!

2 comments:

  1. Good points, but I do wish you had thought more about exploring specific examples in order to deepen your analysis.

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  2. I think that you did a really good job figuring out what was written in the letters, and a good job analyzing the whole thing. However maybe just use a few more examples next time, but overall you did awesome!!

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